13
Mar
10

The girl in my dream

long black hair,

dimples when she smiled,

sitting in the train watching the grass go by,

the red brick house with an apple tree,

looking at the children running under its leaves,

ohh how wonderful…the girl in my dream.

By Muhammad Shoaib Ali.

(I really had this dream).

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4 Responses to “The girl in my dream”


  1. March 14, 2010 at 12:54 am

    Beautifully written – i love the play on imagery it follows just like a dream would – very creative – Great Job!

  2. March 14, 2010 at 12:56 am

    Thank You…Im glad you like it :).

  3. 3 Marina_Ukraine
    March 14, 2010 at 5:40 am

    Hello from Ukraine !

    I liked this poem.

    I saw myself in it because I too have the long black hair.

    I will follow because I like such style of poetry.

    You know Ukraine has born some famous poets over time too !

    Sincerely,

    Marina Demchuck.

    Rivne – Ukraine.

  4. March 14, 2010 at 3:46 pm

    Thank you Marina,

    I like poetry that comes out of Ukraine. Lots of influencial love poetry…Its very nice :).


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